Pirates
One day there was a ship anchored in the deep blue sea.
It was a pirate ship and the pirates went on a little boat to a sandy beach. After they had come to the sandy beach two pirates went to look for some coconuts and the
pirate captain sat on a big rock and he took of his red pirate jacket. Then the three pirates drank the coconut juice because they were thirsty. When they were finished they went to look for a treasure.
Serena I have just finish reading your story and it is good I really like it, I think you mean When they were finished they went to look for treasure not for a treasure. But other then that I like it.
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