Wednesday, March 20, 2013

Character Description about Alexandria

Alexandria is a short person and she has beautiful dark brown eyes. She has short brown curly hair and also has tan skin colour. Also her favourite colour is blue. She has great personality because she tells the truth to others and also to her friends and familys. She likes to play games online and she also likes to finish off her work and learn new things. What I enjoy doing with Alexandria is that she is very intelligent at sports and also she likes to giggle and laugh a lot.

Sunday, March 17, 2013

My touch news writing

What I'm looking forward through this year is touch. I love touch because its my favourite sport.I hoped that we do have touch trails this year because I will want to verse other schools at what I am looking forward too. I really hoping we can verse Baradene because I want to beat them at touch this year because last year they came first and we came second which was a tough game it was 2 , 1 to Baradene. I've played touch for three months for a rep team called (Counties Manukau Touch) so I've learned a lot of skills and game planes from my team , so as we came second last year 2012 , I want my team for school to come first this year for 2013 and I will never give up on dream.

Simile and Metaphor

Allen Duff

Allen Duff is one of the people that dose Duffy Book's at Home's , and the 2 facts that I found about him is that his first ever book that he has ever wrote is (Once Were Warriors) . The fact that I didn't know about Allen Duff is that he was born on the (26-10-1950) in (Rotorua). So at assembly Mr Burt announced that there would be a special person coming next week on Monday , from (France) to share his wonderful stories with us, and to give us our boxes of Duffy books. The question that I got from Allen Duff is that if you want to do something with your life then you must read first then do what you want to do because you can’t just go or sign up for it if you haven’t read before so it’s important that you must read so you know what to do.

Sunday, March 10, 2013

Show not tell

Sweating down my forehead It felt like boiling drops of scorched water. My feet felt like the BBQ was cooking my feet to meat as I was moaning for shade. It felt like a steaming , boiling , BBQ day like I was getting roast for dinner.

Friday, March 8, 2013

My Writing Sample

This morning we all completed our first Writing Sample for 2013 I have posted it just as I wrote it in the 40 minutes we were given,so the throughout this year I will be able to look back and reflect on the progress I have made in my writing ,I will post my learning goals from this soon. PICNIC AT PT ENGLAND BEACH As I arrived to school late I walked into class and everybody was sitting down as my teacher was marking the roll. When I walked into class she asked me if my mum was still coming with us to the beach but with a explanation I “,said, no sorry. After when my teacher finish the roll our whole class headed to the hall for a little assemble before we leave to the beach. After when Mr Burt was taking long with all his instructions and rules I started to have pins and needles going up my feet to my legs it felt really weird , it felt like someone was electrocuting me with a needal. After that my whole school headed towards the beach as the scenes leaded the little ones. As I still had my pins and needle going up my legs it started to die out . My legs were so exhausted that I couldn't even move. It was quite cold as the wind was moving through body , It was a really cloudy day. As we arrived to the beach everybody lined up in there class lines on the grass so our principal Mr Burt can talk to us again about what we should be doing and giving us some instructions. Then we went to seat out our tarpolin for us to have lunch on. Then me and my friends went to sit the on the chairs above the tarpolin and had lunch. Then we went down to the sand to play touch with my friends. After that me and my friends went up to the fields to play tag.