Monday, November 26, 2012

Serena eclipse writing

On a hot windy dark day, on Wednesday there was an Eclipse up in the sky. As I was looking up into the sky I saw the moon sticking with the sun as the sun was trying to separate from the moon. It was so exciting because it was my first time seeing an Eclipse. When I looked

up my eyes were sore because it was so bright that the clouds were moving away from the Eclipse.What I liked about the Eclipse is when the sun was trying to get away from the moon. My favorite part of
the Eclipse is when we were cooking pancakes the same time.

1 comment:

  1. I missed all the action while I was in my meeting! I like the way you described this as if the moon and sun were stuck together. We really needed special viewing glasses on that day didn't we.
    Keep taking an interest in things around you Serena.
    Mrs Nua


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